Very t0uching piece. g0od j0b 0nce again

Man... I'm astounded... You wrote so many amazing pieces on this day... This one is no exception. Top writing my friend!!

Good work, I'm sure many people can relate to this poem and the feeling you seem to be going through in it.

I liked how this was written freely without conforming to a rhyming scheme or structure. The simple language you use, makes what you write seem more real and effective. I also liked how it had a postive ending to it, and how you seemed to have some salvation despite all the sadness. :)

I'm lost for words. My mouth literally dropped. Theres nothing bad I can say about this poem, Thought it was great from start to finish! 5/5

`taleee xx

Awwwww...This Was Really Good :D...It Was Really Good...I Bet A Lot Of People Can Relate To This :D Your Poetry Is Amazing.. ;D 5/5
Love,
Steph