Very powerful and sad! Beautiful rictameter!

Yes it is very powerful and tremendously sad! Wonderfully written rictameter!

Very powerfull and extremely well written I so admire anyone who has the discipline to write stuctured poetry, I myself just jumble it all on the page and let the reader sort it out lol
Wonderfull job.
Tim

How's this for honesty? Absolutely brilliant!

WOW Katie..... a beautiful rictameter! Filled with emotion, very powerful..... it flows well.