I think you wrote this very beautifully and your words create such peaceful imagery in my mind. But the form of this haiku is not the way its supposed to be. A haiku should have a syllable count of this:
5
7
5
You had the syllables right, but in the wrong order. So my advice would be to look it over and make the changes necessary. But otherwise than that, this was beautiful. Keep writing, always and forever...