Wow im sorry you feal that way but keep your head high and keep walkin the pain will end promice 5/5

Wow..Awesome poem

Triggered these feelings inside of me
When jealousy tends to rise up
Donâ??t fall into the habit of being unhappy
Beware of exactly what you are feeling

I love That Stanza...Great job throughout the whole thing...5/5
~ITBOY~

Hey! thanks 4 the lovely comment! good poem!! I loved how u used really unique words! It sounded like it came from someone with a mature look on life. really great job. Ruthie xoxo

I think there is much meaning in this poem, I found it quite disturbing so it was really effective! The last couple of lines are sticking with me, they are different and definately hint at darker intentions. nice work