Aw, sweetie this is a fantastic poem, sorry it took me so long to comment on your poem but i havent been online really, anyways, this is so beautiful and yet sad, its strange how sadness is beauty most of the time, i love the emotion in the poem, its well written and descriptive, lol and i think the title is perfect the way it is, take care, xxoo

Wow i really liked the poem...i can kinda relate to it awesome job! 5/5

U know what i think this is the best poem ive read byfar i think its awsome ur a great writer well thanks for the comment. 5/5