Brilliant poem got my 5 vote keep writing take care hun sarahx

More of a quote format, but none the less inspriational

I thought that that was pretty good! keep writing!

Wel done i love the way u wtite babe keep writin keep it up 5/5 xxx

I love ur poems dude keep it up=).

Dean.

Great poem, try and use , it will slow it down abit and i think will get the feelings across better, but still a 5/5 from me.

NEVER stop writing, your good!

O babe. that was touching. great writing. i love all your poems hope to see some more there very intresting 5/5 x x x

I LOVE it. Its a 10

Lil Very nice... i know he heard your words..
NightElf...

Loved it just like all your poems Lil, may he RIP, and read this beautiful poem....God bless....

~Jorge~