I LOVE VAMPIRES!!!!!
That only made the poem even better
I shall hit anyone who doesnt say your great
XD
I love your poetry
Love
~Emma

Your a great poet...keep up the good work! 5/5!

I liked this one even though I don't think that it was one of your best works. Vampire poems are my favorite but I just didn't feel it with this one.

The last line was beautiful - it really stood out :)

Peace. [Sole]

I LOVE VAMPIRE POEM and this was really great I loved it! Keep it up! ^_^

It was a bit creepy but that added to effect a good job xx ALLy xx

Yes, vampires are pretty kool, but not as kool as ur poetry. seriously Rubz. This was awesome!.
Rock on
-Suzie

Wow thats crazy:
But my thirst would not keep at bay
As we lay in our bed i drank her dry

and i love this line:
Before the wind blows my ashes away.

this is a great poem. nice job