Thats so sad babe im so srry that this happens to you, if y0o need anything i will always be here 4 y0o 2 talk 2, g0d y0o dont deserve this babe, u need 2 tell s0meone...luv maddison

Wonderfull story, descriptoin, mediforic/poetic dream... I love it!

Your poem is freakin long

I liked it alot and who cares if it's long. those are some of the best ones....thx for commenting...love ya and take care...
lots of love,
sore

Wow thats what mi life is like right now! good job keep it up!! 5/5

Mesmerizing! Especially the dream! I could see it all, and what a sight! Great delivery...Perfect title.
Have you ever read the Greek tragedies?.........

Hi There!!

I must admit, this is something that i hv never gone through all the time in this site so far, this is just unique and a wonderful write for sure...worth being long and i could hv read more.

feelings beautifully xpressed.

all the best and take care

Wow. That's terrible. NOt the poem but the situation. Nice imagery i love the whole thing. keep it up
-Vino

Wow, that is so sad. Very unique and imaginative. Wish you the best of luck, Take Care!

--*NaydeeN*

I hope you make it through all your days.. good work.

I think this story is really great, keep up the good work and contiue writing it

if you have time r/c/c

xxDeLie