I LOVE IT>.....

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elissa

Sometimes short poems are the best...this is a perfect example of one!

Wow this is a really great quick poem. Its amazing how you put all the emotion through in such a short piece. Great work. xx

Hey, i loved this poem, short but perfect :) 5/5 xxxxxx

For such a short poem lot of emotion 2 it great job def 5/5 keep writing so i can keep reading take care hun sarah x