This is a realy good poem.....i read it while listening to hte cha cha slide...u should feel special cuz im dancing lol...

i love this poem.

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xxo
elisas

Thanx.......yeah.....we do....hope to talk more

xoxo
wb
elissa

Deep, sorrowful and angry... Another brilliant write!! You're doing really well now, first you discover this style and produce some great poems, now you have mastered it and are creating some wonderful poems!!

Well done Luke, you are talented. Keep writing and I will keep reading.

Awesome, Luke! I can feel the pain your words create. Such raw emotion...Excellent!