Aw wow, This is really good. You expressed a great deal of emotion. I pray things are ok! 5/5 It was really good!!!

natz x0x

Ah 5/5
i love the
way you
write this its awesome
and i really like the message
~Bloodscars~

Really good work. I can get the despair, yearning and real love here there's also such a deep sense of want. That's what I got any way. 5/5
All the Best
Sondos

Loved the emotions and desire you expressed in the poem. Good write. Keep writing. 5/5

Impressed
temped to put 1 for a reason you know -_-
But its awesome

This poem flowed very nicely... And the message you painted came out loud and clear! I loved how you wrote the last the sentences in the paragraph... such as

And now I cry
My life's a lie
I just ask why

It was very original and a joy to read!

Not one of your best but it has a sinister undercurrent running through it. Top poem....maybe just not my topic....Welldone...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Wow great poem i especially like this stanza

A suicidal note I write
A prison cell, A dimming light
Whats left
Reflects
This sharp-edged knife
My hunger strike
My fading life

Great job keep it up 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

I loved this poem!!! 5/5!!! Your an amazing writer so keep up he good work!! It seemed to really flow!! Keep it up!! Thanks again 4 commenting on mine!!!

It was good overall.
xxxxx

Really love it, great flow, was set up really nicely, good work!