I really like this poem, the way that you incorperate happiness through your sorrows. but it's only true.

Flashbacks coming back <------ That line sooo annoyed me! Too many "backs" Lmao.

Okies, suicide. Cliche, but I have suicide poems that are wayy worse. I mean they're only like three stanza's long. LMAO. Yes, yes, there's really no.. how do I say this.. "Wow" factor, but it was decent.

Hehe, I've proved my point. Yours are better than mine. :]

Cayce xx