Comments : Let it Ride

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Bill, what a beautiful, honest poem!

    "I will live my life as I always have, full throttle
    Sometimes wobbly, as I look through an empty bottle"
    ^^^ These lines are incredible!
    I love this poem, great job! ;o)

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Bill....
    I really like it... I will email ya about and let you know what I think of it. Take care my friend and thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Well Bill another Masterpiece. Such a heartfelt and beautiful piece. Your talent is awesome....

    Love ya, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Chris Harding

    This is another excellent piece of work, well done mate :) A really positive view of time and the passage of life there, I really like it, keep the up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Oh I really liked this one. It really made me take a look at my own life and really think. Someof your versus could even describe me.

    If I could live my life over again, nothing would I change
    Mistakes have been my way of life, learning along the way
    All I have done, things I have seen, shaping me
    I will live my life as I always have, full throttle
    Sometimes wobbly, as I look through an empty bottle

    Those lines were my absolute favorite and I feel the same way. At times when we are facing difficult challenges or periods in our lives we wish we could change them but looking back I realize that I would not want to change anything for all in the past has made me who I am today. 5/5 Another awesome read from your list of poems!

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Bill, "Sea of Friendship (A Collab)"! Wow, that was the best friendship poem I have ever read. You guys did a wonderful job creating this beautiful poem! So sweet and heartfelt, only true friends can write something like this, simply perfect!

  • 18 years ago

    by shellyspraytech

    Wow... excellent !!! i know these feelings