Hey wow thats deep nd reminded me of my ex...gr8 poem 5/5

This poem was excptionally strong, and FILLED with great emotions! I really loved your wording, and how strong the feelings were. great poem!! 5/5

Wow, thats an amazing poem. Your flow was well done as well as the consistant use of vocabulary. I luved it. I really liked the lines:

"nothing compares to the pain of loosing you
now that you're gone theres only emptiness in my heart
don't you care about all we've been through?
the pain shot through me like a poisoned dart"

Well said and deep. Keep up the awesome work 5/5
~Luvz~
~Angie~
xoxo

Good poem

'Each chapter we've made together was created from love
What once was told as a perfect romance turn into to a heart breaking tragedy
heartache like this I've never known of'

Kinda thought that verse was odd but other than that, good poem. 4/5

I always admire those who can rhyme without ruining the poem! well done!

xx

Know what ya going through there. my gf left me 2 months ago, and I also felt like it was the end of the world. but after some time, I got over it. just hang on, and allow your mind to relax, and think clearly again. Life keeps on going no mather what, so don't go giving up so easy.
Very good poem by the way 5/5
Tim