Hey i love it it is really good i can relate to it keep up the good work ♥

O0o0oh Hey cuz! I love your poem so0o0o much hehe. Keep up the great work =] Lots of love, Your favourite cousin in the world..Natz x0x

Ohh my this is very good! 22

Wow! i thats amazing keep it up id love to read others

Brilliant...love dia mwaz xoxo

Hey there.
This was short but so powerful!
Well done I really liked it!
x

I esp love the second stanza. overall pretty good.

WOW... this is definitly my favorite of the two great job.. i love the whole thing.. its SOOOOO true..
keep writting!

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

It flowed well and seemed pretty good with the rhymes and stuff. Hard to pull off. Again you could have gone deeper. I think this now puts us in the place of the person or people ignoring the girl. Shame people ignore when others are in pain.

Wow i love this. it flowed really well together the rhymes and everything. I think you could explore more deepth but brilliant.

Kat