Awww, This is really good! I loved it, I wish i could feel that way. It was a gret poem. Keep it up =]

- luv natz x0x

It was good, well done
xxxxx

Title stolen from an oasis song but beautiful poem...i mean this.

Wow that poem was AWESOME FANTASTIC... i loved it... wow, everything fits in perfectly. that poem is soo good. I cannot picture it any other way. that is an amazing poem. Your a really good writer. Keep it up. Purely 5/5

Talking about love...I LOVE THIS POEM
Nature imagery...another great poetic aspect, such an impressive poem, the use of all the different natural aspects and their beauty
Thanks for such a good read :)

I really like the stream of consciousness feel to this poem. It truly shows emotion better than if it were confined to a specific scheme.

I really like this poem.

Bouncing on the water,
the sun crystallizes the river,
bringing love to life within it
and upon it.

I really liked this part, the way it is written, its just wonderful.

Cute poem... Your form of writing is really odd to me; you just don't seem to have one. Maybe if you did your flow would be smoother... It's a bit rocky to me. Other than that I loved it.. The way you described everything.. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Very well expressed...i really liked the wording and how all the words were just so beautiful when you put them together. I could feel the emotion pouring out of the screen, thats how emotional it was...Great Write!!!

Ohh. I like this. It was really nicely done. Great way to put how you feel into a poem. Lovely. :]

Mmmmm I think my favorite stanza is "Bouncing on the water,
the sun crystallizes the river,
bringing love to life within it
and upon it."

Great job =] 5/5