It's good but short, keep on writing

Sorry for your loss, I lost my boyfriend 9 mnths ago, and its hard to write about someone you have just lost cause it just cracks you up, once you are over the shock im sure you will be able to write a longer one but this one was great 4 such a short poem take care hun sarah x

Goodjobb..sorry about your boyfriend but im sure he is waiting for you and one day you will be together again

This poem is short, but its really good. Take care!

--*NaydeeN*