Comments : The Hurricane

  • 18 years ago


    Beautiful imagery and just astounding emotion.
    I love these lines:

    "caught within the corner
    of a place wrapped in confusion"

    "beating against the solitude of peace"

    "a quite slumber is left to breath."

    Great stuff as always! Love ya~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Wonderfully written, Jeannie! i just loved every line, every word in this. the imagery you evoke is so overpowering!

    great work on this one!

    love and peace

  • 17 years ago

    by ~yOu EnVy Me ~

    Even though i dont know what some of these big words mean i think its lovely

  • 17 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    This reminded me of love. :| lol

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Comment #5:
    WOW! WOW! WOW! I have such a hard time writing about nature, but you did an exellent job on this....I'm just so afraid that with how much I praise your work you're just going to start thinking that I'm just saying it to be nice, but are VERY talented. I loved the lines:
    Slowly it grows
    invading the silence
    parting it's depths with despair
    and reaching the crescendo of rage.
    These lines almost make it sound graceful...and yet they convey a feeling of anger. Once again, great job. 5/5 as always! :)
    ~Midnight Sun