Well if it wasn't meant to be a poem, it sure made a great accidental one. I wouldn't worry about the breaking up of lines, this way works. There's never really a great way to break up the lines of an unrhymed poem. Infact, it's something I can't do so well hehe. Anyway, it's a really great poem. I'm glad I got the chance to read it. My favourite lines were:
it's form is unseen
non-existent, made up of nothing
and everything.

Keep it up! :)

That was rlly good and i think poets hav such a better outlook on how things rlly are...i like the way u use repetition but still keep it simple in a way that makes people think into deeper meaning....nice job and i rlly like the poem, grrt writing, keep up the awesome work! thx for ur comment,
love ya lots
sore

This was really good. Keep up the good work. 5/5
xoxoxox
Jess