This Morning I Woke Up

Wow that is such a beautiful poem.. its very short but you did a great job on describing everything. I really liked it.
oh & btw...two of the poems you requested..i have already r/r/c on. so I am doing two others in it's place, hope you don't mind...but anyways.. you did a really good job on this poem! Keep it up!

I think you should extend it, but beyond that its amazing....

[lostlaureate- come find me]

I really like this poem. As I said on 'Clap', it's very modern, but I definitely like this one.

You use very interesting metaphors and personification. A great style, really, even if it's not what I would normally prefer. xD

Amazing and beautiful.

i like this line
"The bird of dawn was looking queer"

What you've written is great, might do with being a little longer - like a greater description of the scene?
Still love it though