I like that poem...It's really good!!!Keep writeing!! mwa kiss

Kool poem keep it up

Great peice very well written and expressied.

slight typo in the line "The pain starts yo dissappear" think the "yo" should be "to"

5/5

Wow this was so inventive and creative! The title grabbed my attention rather fast, because it was so different from the normal titles! This is a awesome poem and you've definatly earned a spot on my faverotes list! 5/5

Not much I can say about this one. I really liked it. there wasn't really any line that really stood out to me but I still liked the meaning.

~retniapdoolb~

Scary poem
yet great
. . .

I think you could have broken this up a bit :)

I think your talented but then again I must have told you that almost everytime. I'm running out of poems to read that you wrote :)

Sad, but well written, enjoyed it
love Tara-Kay

Vivid imagery and a complete story out of a short poem, 5/5

Hmmm.... I dont see why you have a pyromaniac mind? Are you in love with fire or something? I dont really understand that part. But i really enjoyed how you pieced the words together in such a way that you did. 4/5

Its ok it seems it needs to be built moreso.

Its not bad, but Im not feeling this one like I have many others of yours, in short, its really not your best work