Top of the world

by Allisha Fox   Mar 13, 2006


Your kiss
its amazing.
when you kiss me
i feel like i am on top of the world.

Your touch,
it moves me.
when you touch me
i feel like i am in heaven.

Your smile
its warm and nice.
when you smile at me
i feel like i am the only one around.

Your eyes
they are inviting.
when you look at me
the world melts away.

You make me feel
like i am the top of the world.
with you i can do anything,
i am on top of the world.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Marky J

    Brilliant poem. Well structured. 5/5

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  • 18 years ago

    by Galen Dangler

    Very nice wording, cool intimacy

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Good poem.

    Your kiss
    its amazing
    when u kiss me
    i feel like i am
    on top of the
    world.

    That right thee is redundant we alread know he's kissed you so if you just say...when u kiss me I feel like i am on top of the world, that sounds better. Or well to me. No poet is perfect and critism will only make u better taske this nad learn form it dear.

    Good poem! Keep it up, nice prospective.

    Lissa

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