Some of the rhyming could be fine-tuned, but I love the theme, and the ideas
Another great poem =]

Great poem, the repetition of the words, 'He loves me….He loves me not.' created a good effect on the poem. Great poem, keep up the good work!!!

The repetition worked really well, and gave the last line maximum impact! Again, at points the rhyming seemed forced, ut overall, great poem :)

Peace. [Sole]

You know what, this poem is different and that made it all the more enjoyable. I remember picking petals off flowers myself while repeating that line and always feeling dissapointed when it revealed: He loves me not. This captures such childhood innocence. I love it.

Hey i found this poem enjoyable to read, and the repetition throughout the poem made it all the more enjoyable. i remember picking at petals when i was slighty younger, great poem!!

You were really buliding up to the end
it made me want to read mor and more.

Its cute. kind of comical. and i like that its something new and the repetition is perfect. :)

This poem is cute in a kinda way lol. It's something us girls have all done whether we did it for a joke or not. I don't no why but it reminds me of summer and make s me feel really cheerful...Keep up the good work :D

I LOVE this poem.. it was such a good way to write one!! 5/5 EXCELLENT!!
oh my favorite line was
Petal after petal falls to the floor,
As I chant my childish saying more and more.. wow so great!!

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

This was a great poem
wonderfuly written

~GLASS~

This is a fantastic piece, so realistic and heart touching.
you've got a great talent.
10/10

gema
xoxoxo