Nice shows emotion

Sad - time really hurts and slow downs with love eh?
Just noticed a couple of grammar mishaps - I'd advise not using the spell check =]

"Someone who would hold your hand until your heart stopped."..... the greatest line i've read all night.... i gave me chills

This poem is really good. great word choice! it really captures the emotion. great job! 5/5*
by the way..love your name...lol

Nice poem...I liked the use of repetition...I'm guessing you write your poems in word then paste them onto the site and use spell check because there are a few mistakes the but otherwise a good read.

You may want to sort out the characters in this poem as some of them are a bit messy
But the poem itself, I know everyone says this but I do really understand what you are going on about. The last line was perfect and the use of 'Tick tock' well I did that in one of my own poems a while back!
Great job :)

Sad. I can only imagine how horrible that must be. I've waited on calls before. But that wasn't the most important call of my life I must admit. The repeptition was good, one mistake.

My heart can just Finnish decaying

Finish only has one N in it - you may want to remove the second :)

Really nice write, a little sad, but the flow was good and the tick, tock, tick, tock, really brought in a good rhythm.

Peace. [Sole]

Nice job.. My favorite part in it is this line

How much you truly love me,
Open my hearts eyes so that it may see

I dont know why i guess ive never heard the term "my hearts eyes".. anyways excellent job keep it up!!

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Wonderful write
lovley rythm
liked the repetition
flow was off a lil

~GLASS~