Wow,
Eddy, that was really touching, i like it when you write peoms, that are like storys, i really enjoyed it,...although it made my heart sink a little... its sad really...people everyday are cheated from life... and the most beautiful people die young, this made your poem ever so real...keep it up .
Ashley
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This is such a sad poem you no I have read alot of poems but this one gave me a shiver down my spine nearly made me cry and that takes alot got my 5 vote keep writing and take care
sarah x