Bill
passion, romance, love, dedication. your poem radiates with the feelings you have in your heart. i wish i could see what motivates you to write such meaningful, soulful, loving poems.

Wow.. u have a great way with words! it flows so beautifully.

That was amazing, really heart-warming, perfectly worded, and beautiful imagery. 5/5
Helen

Woah.. Nice Poem.. It's Really Good.. With A Great Flow.. Keep It Up Bill!

Bill , Bill , Bill
What an amazingly beautiful poem . I have truly missed your love poems sooooo much .

Dang ! you just have a way of melting all the ladies heart with words ....*S*
Beautifully written , my friend

So romantic, so beautiful *melts* You have such a way with words!!!!! Amazing poem!

Wonderful write, beautifully written. Passionate and breath taking!!

Lovely piece of work. the rhyme words are unusual and fit into the flow so beautifully.

peace
shobhana

This poem was passionate and so sincere! Very great. I really loved it. I'll be reading more of your poetry. 5/5

Always,
-Brittany

Beautiful and passionate. It was fun to read

You got it! that's what make a girl a woman... respect, loyalty, love and dignity from her man.. Women want to know that they have a purpose in your life, this will make her a great wife. and you a happy man (smiling)... Great poem... express yourself...

Truly amazing Bill. She must be a wonderful lady . I wish you all the happiness.
I have really missed reading your poetry. I hope to write again soon..been really busy with my "new" life.
Take care

Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Very nice and beautiful