Hey thax 4 commenting on my poem i really appreciate it and i allways return a favour. your a great poet and i think we both have a lot in common i understand were your coming from keep it up ill comment wen eva i can k
love cassie144

Wow gurl that was really good... keep up the good work.... ^_^

Its really good
really sad tho

Thats a really good poem, and very sad at the same time!! Keep it up your really good !

xoJadeox

First of all, i really like this poem it was great!! i like the way you used onomatopoeia in it an stuff...an 2nd of all thank you so much for your comment! i appreciate it...an i always return favors...everyone here is jus so good at writing poems an i love readin them an commenting on them...

HEY THANXZ FOR THE COMPLIMENT I LIKE YOUR POEMS TOO!

ABSOULUTLY LOVE IT. The best poem i have read in a long long long time. can i print it out if your name is on it and all?

AWESOME POEM!! this poem is amazing..really sad and touching

**¤**Amanda**¤**

Wow - I can relate, awesome poetry, I loved every word! The repetition really brought out the power of the rest of each section. Perfect.

Peace. [Sole]

Omg this has to be my favorite poem of yours so far!
i absolutly love it

ashlick(ashley)

It was good. The flow was great yet the beginning wasn't really that good but it did tie in.
~S3I

Another sad peice. Well dont though. I liked how you repeated those few words. Another awesome job! Keep it up *hugs*

`taleee xx

Wow! that was so powerfull! i loved how you repeated those words at the beggining of each stanza! keep it up!
jessy xox

Very emotional, I really liked it