To the man I thought I loved

by Kys Dirty Little Secret   Mar 15, 2006


I thought I loved you
I thought I cared
I thought you were the world
I thought I could do this without you

I thought maybe he would come back
I thought I could kiss him one more time
I thought he could hold me again
I thought maybe I could change for him.

But then as I started writing these thoughts down this is what came to mind...

I thought I loved you; NOPE that don\'t work because I never stopped loving you.
I thought I cared; Wow this one don\'t work either because I still care.
I thought you were the world, in which you still are.
I thought I could do without you, I can\'t but I guess I have too.

I thought maybe he would come back, ummm I don\'t know if you will but I sure as sugar want you too.
I thought I could kiss him one more time; I could but I don\'t really want to be hurt anymore then I already am.
I thought I could hold him one more time. I probably could, but most likely that is a no.
I thought maybe I could change for him. WAIT I PUT THAT ONE umm yea that is in some serious revising. I think it is HE who needed to change his ways not mine.

So as you see I still love, care, and a bunch of other things to you, but one thing is you need to change your ways seriously.

All guys (well some) need to stop thinking about themselves and at least figure out what is going wrong in the relationship because my guy didn\'t and âhe just lost the best thing he ever could haveâ quote by my best friend.

Now sorry about the whole guy thing. Not all guys are ba just the ones up where I live are being real immature these days. So no guy take this as a diss this is just a poem to one particular guy. So plz rate and comment i return the favor

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ali

    I really like it... I had a boyfriend and he was the biggest player I ever met. somedays he would make me feel great and others like shit. He'd always talk about other girls in front of me. Part of me still likes him and still care about him and its been four months. Pathetic eh? But the other part hates what he did to me and partly I hate what i did to myself because i knew what he was before I dated him.. But great poem keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Megg

    No not all guys are jerks but most are and i say that when i have a bf who can be a jerk

  • 18 years ago

    by Ali

    I like this poem because it is reality!!!!
    and i know what you mean most guys are immature all of the guys up here are immature too, well all but 2 of them, thankfully one of them is mine!! but great poem, keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Mystic Enchantress

    Wow that was qamazing my friend i vote you 5. lots of deep thoughts

  • 18 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    I liked ths one a lot,i read some of ur poems,they r really good...5/5
    "Shaymaa"..