Wow I can't even begin to count how many times I've done this. I love your writing topics they're so unique! 5/5

Exceedingly good rhymes and rhythm. The repeated line is catchy. Great job, 5/5.

I'm not sure if you need to end it with your face again....it seemed sort of out of place.....The second stanza started out well but could have moved in a better direction......other then that it was a good poem and alot of people could relate to it.......
*I know I could*

~Retniapdoolb~
*Keep On Writing*

Dear me how this speaks a bit to my heart . . .
It actually made me feel pretty sad :(

I didn't think you need the second your face in the last stanza.

I love your poems. So unique and brilliant. I don't know what else to say wihtout telling you what I hope you already know.

I absolutely loved this poem!! It was totally brilliant. Well done
xxxx
love Tara-Kay

Sole, what made this poem brilliant was the way
You described the classroom and the things you
Heard and saw. The more you explained about
The things around you the more I could feel as
If I was there. And the more I stared at the space,
The more I was trapped inside you and was
drowned in your emotions. A very good poem
in my opinion.
Much love,
marjan

Hey i can feel the emotion in this one really well. Such a great poem to read and it was really powerful - to me anyway :)

Nice poem i like it i can really understand it cuz no matter what i see some one's face too. nice poem great job 5.5

Hey.. this is reli cute.. i love ur rhyme and flow, they go great.. and ur title is pretty attractive.. i reli like how u ended it..short but expressive..
keep it up
take care
NannO