I loved the way this poem backs itself up. The flow is awesome, and its totally someones reality.

Was an o.k. poem.....you seemed to repeat things you did not need to in order to get the point across but it was still good.

Wow, thats really good seriously its sad and if its true i hope it gets better

First of all lemme tell you the first stanza was the best
In my opinion.
In the last line of the forth stanza, I think it would be
Better if you say “she” instead of “you”.
I like it where you suddenly say ”you cry; crimson
Tears”.
And I loved how you ended it, I mean the last two
stanzas.
I was actually believing as if I was all this even though
I’m not so I guess this poem is a little scary. And this
Way we can understand some people better. In one
Word this poem was very effective. Yup, “an effective poem”.

Much love,
marjan

I loved this one! very sad...but i liked it! 5/5!
~*Linz*~

Wow... this poem blew me away... its so very unique.. and i love the way you have different sections... in a way... i seriously... im speachless... this poem is sorrowfully beautiful and i can relate to more then one stanza... im in love with your poems :) 5/5 -Jen-

Wow.. that one almost made me cry. It was so beautifully written with something everyone can relate to. And I loved the stanza:
Tears with meaning;
Of past years;
tears with emotion,
These are crimson tears.
Wow! I'm so speechless.. This poem really blew me away. Great job on this. 5/5

Some nice words that flowed smoothly together. Some great imagery. Well done. Not exactly great with some stanzas but it got a message across. Your last two stanzas ended on a strong note.
~Faith-less

Aww, it was so sad. The imagery was good, the flow was awesome, the words were strong and i loved the whole things, keep it up my friend
xxxxxxx