Thats deep and really kool and dark... its kinda confusing but in a good way...one that makes u wanna read it a few times....ur an awesome writer...
love ya lots,
sore

Very well written, it gets a little confused in parts but that just means that the reader has to pay extra attention which ensures that they will not waver.

5/5

I love this poem. I don't even know why i just do it says so much without saying it directly. It just has so much power.Wow keep writing

jessie

I like a poem that at first read you cannot take in all its meaning but with a second or third it all make perfect sense (at least to the individule reader). I enjoyed the complexity of thought.
Very nice.

I love this poem! First off, it had an excellent flow...and for some poets, thats really hard to get. Also, you made a deep poem easy to read the meaning of it and you made all the words easy to understand. I can't even think of anything bad about it! Excellent job!