The best

Yes, it is

Good!!

good luck

CK

Reli gud xx

I like this poem lots!
Really good!
Keep it up!
~Cindy~

I like the flow of the poem, its like a soft mellody. Seemes fragile but its strong in feeling. there is a strength in pain to sorry, sometimes its just knowig what you lost. I like it, its simple but says so much

Aww thats sad.. lol but good writing.. lol

I really liked this poem it was rele cute and sweet

Very nice poem, and I really understood it. I know that makes no sense, but that's okay. And for a helpful hint, the lines:

The delight and joy of the life
Then I remember, you are one

That really doesn't make any sense, at least not to me.

Awh, very sad yet sweet. It flowed rather well to. I loved it. Great Job Goran. Five-Outa-Five.

Thats another poem! you just proved that when you love some1 you see everything beuty and all in them!!!

Awsome!
Keep it up!

Good poem..gettn better...keep it upo,. I have one called, I'm not here..check it out..

Lissa

I love how you think of her that way... not every girl is taken for that. Whomever she is/will be is very lucky.

4/5

Sad love never fear cause true love is nv uhhh i will work on it great work as always

I absolutely loved this poem.. everything was perfect.. well done 5/5 xx

Oh if I commented on a poem more than once I am sorry, I didn't look through the comments to see if I had or not.. There were a couple I remember reading and commenting on, but not sure about a few of them..

excellent work.. All of Your poems are great and I have thouroughly enjoyed the last hour of reading them.. Thank You and I look forward to reading more soon xx

Oh my gosh that poem is so sweet. im sorry she's not there anymore.
but all ur poems are really good.
keep writing!
luv mia!

This is a really cute poem
you're a pretty good writer

Awww this poem is so very sad, i hope it isn't true!!! 5/5

5/5.
Emma xx

One of my faves.
Thankyou for all the lovely comments, i always feel honoured to recieve them from someone of your talent
5/5 as always
*Gem*