So woefully sad - i do hope writing this has in some way made you feel better.

do take care
good luck and peace
shobhana

Aww Steven you just have to hope for the best!! It sucks for me- someone who cares for you- to have to read this and that things have been going on with you! Your still writing better then ever though! Keep expressing yourself and keep smiling!
Chelsey-Lynn

Another pain filled write... As I said before you are in my prayers. Here's to hoping that things will get better soon :)

Very nice write.........very well said through such lovely words.......5/5

luv,
Bharti

Great job! I loved it 5/5

natz x0x

The pain expressed in your poem touches my heart. The words truly reflect the sadness in your heart. We all cling to the hope of tomorrow and what it will bring. Thankyou for sharing your thoughts and feelings

Hmm I love this poem.

So nice written. It's perfect. The flow is just fantastic. Wow..

It's a question no one can answer "will tomorrow be a better day". Very powerful that you've put that question in your poem.
All we can do is pray that tomorrow will be a better day.

Loved it alot.. Great poem!

Lotsaaaaaaaaa love
-xxx-

I think this poem was great i love the way you put passion into it