Its becuz she is nutz ova you...thats the reason....lol...cool song...

Song :Niice song there Andy, =) Hmm well You should know not all us poets are the depressive types *tries ntot o take offense lol* I don't know what or how to critique a song so ...I'm not gonna try lol...

Other Stuff: Okay Andy, Welcome to the Fishbowl, I am the manager, my names Jenn, if you have any porblems please ask myself, or >tornapart, or Fighter. We'll be happy to assist you. All I ask is you fallow the rule or both the club and the site. [Please read the thread on the disscussion saying: Welcome] Other then that have fun and Play nice =)

Welcome to the Bowl
Jenn

^^^ Please exuse all those typos, I just work up this is what I meant:

Song: Niice song there Andy, =) Hmm well You should know not all us poets are the depressive types *tries not to take offense lol* I don't know what or how to critique a song so ...I'm not gonna try lol...

Other Stuff: Okay Andy, Welcome to the Fishbowl, I am the manager, my names Jenn, if you have any problems please ask myself, >tornapart, or Fighter. We'll be happy to assist you. All I ask is you fallow the rules of both the club and the site. [Please read the thread on the discussion saying: Welcome] Other then that have fun and Play nice =)

Welcome to the Bowl
Jenn

Really sorry about that!

Woke*** DAMNIT andy! even my edit has typos! you know what. I give up screw typoes. SCREW THEM!

Wow..excellent song..I would listen to this song if it ever got made into one...One of the best lyrics ive read....Joc

Yeah a great song do you sing? play an instrument? or just write song lyrics, would love to hear this with music if it ever is made into a song great job
xx ALLY xx

I wanna hear the actual song!! ..what instrument accompanies it?