Hell ya girl, I know I have been down that block before...but I really like this poem because I have felt those emotions before and you put them together right....keep writing I like your work..

~candice~

Hey I am going through the same thing. I have messed up my life completely and now I am fixing it. Make sure you keep your head up and don't let anyone bring you down..

I feel you on dat one

Ay gurl, i really feel u on this one rite here das wassup!!!!

Yeah girl...that poem is mad good. keep up the work girl.i be lookin out for more.

F u c k ya that was a BAD A S S poem!!! I Loved it great job!!

I liked the way you stood up for yourself. It is true that two can play the same game. The victim can learn from the abuser.

Wow!!!! THAT IS AWESOME!!!!!!! THAT SHIT IS SO TRUE ABOTU GUYS THESE DAYS!

Hell yeah gurl u tell it like it is. I reckon this is awsome.
~Kyra~

Ayo im feelin dis on some otha shit u got ur head in da game and u lettin people kno wats good about it 5/5

What a bad ass poem, this rocks- love the style of the language- and the last couple of lines set it off perfectly!! x

Thatz waz up,I'm a young man myself,but aa good man and some of my female friends would relate to this.
Read some of my poems,you'll relate to it.