The forgotten dream

by AmS   Mar 17, 2006


I no longer dream as i dream about you,
i try to forget every dream i have had that involves you you hurt me once.
to see you go was the hardest part,
letting you go from my mind and
soul.
the part of you was in my heart and now that part has been ripped out and now i cant mend it cause
you have the other half stuck inside your heart.
untill i get that half back i'll wait in sorrows in my forgotten dream until you release me and we can be together free

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  • 16 years ago

    by NeoDaDevil

    Since u had it as featured i thought i'd read it....i rarely read poems or even comment onem unless they are from friends...but good thing i read it....really impressive work

  • 17 years ago

    by -Usmi-

    Rele well written .. but try to keep the lines a little short .. other thn tht great

  • 17 years ago

    by Liana

    That is really good i like it a lot keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by emmaroo

    Its very good and dark
    well done
    xxxx
    emma
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Milton

    I loved it, I've been feeling the same way. I can see how lonely the poem is. Good stuff. :)

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