Great poem take care hun sarah x

~* Been awhile. . . how you been? well i like this one alot its been along time since i've read ur work but its getting really good 5/5 like always keep it up*~ XoXo
-Crazy

Wow this poem actually made me cry because all the memories that i had with my brother and now i never get to see him. thank you for making such a great poem
much love
ashley

I love the irony and love the tone. Very good descriptions of your brother. Good job! =)