Kaylee, what a poem, that was great penned! well done.

Knowing so much about it all
only goes to prove one thing,
Today's Truth may not be
true for tomorrow.

gloria's glen

This is a great poem about sacrifice, which is the greatest love. I love it

How awful, not the poem, that's how it made me feel. The idea of someone relying on you, but you not really wanting it at all. Sounds like some relationship gone wrong, romantic, friendship or family relationship. Sad poem, but portrayed well.

So original - a brilliant write - I think you have finished the poem perfectly :)

Peace. [Sole]

Great poem. Different then most on here!! Totally loved it!! Full of emotion!!
~~Sweetie

Different, but i loved it. well done
xxxxx

This poem makes me feel so guilty of any time I should of done something. 5/5

I wish that i could of been there!....but nice writting!
~*Linz*~

This poem was kind of mysterious kaylee. I like these
Kinds of poems that you should read more than once
To get the meaning. I liked the style of this poem. I
Mean after two lines, you wrote “Not my……”. That
Made the poem even better.
Much love,
Marjan

I cant get over your poems
all of them are SO deep
and they send shivers down my spine
this one
was a work of art
purely and simply ingenious

Love your work.... so young to be so emotionally strentghten. You are interesting.. I will read more of your work...

Let it flow...

It was a lot different to what i usually read but that's what made it worth reading. I really love the way you set it out and chose your words carefully. Well done, keep it up! :)

Amazing poem
it's diffrent but that just makes it alot better :) keep it up :)

~StefQ

This poem is really good. very deep and i loved it! 5/5*

That's really touching and heart warming. I loved it. 5/5

This is beautiful. Almost made me cry at the end just because its so amazingly true, simply put but wonderful anyway.

Sondos

Nice poem very deem there's lot of thought in it keep up the great work thanks so much for the comment. 5.5

Wonderfully written.. I loved how it was so short yet the last lines to each verse really made you think.. beautiful.. and thank you so much for your comment on me poem it means a lot to me

OH MY GOD! I'm speechless, I have NOTHING to say! OMG! AMAZING!

I really like this. good job. i really understand what this means.