Great Detail
and great way of expression through the point
Great job
5/5
~TBOY~

Heartfelt, loving, well done. the couple of short lines however messed with the flow =S, I dunno, the poem is good but if you can make the line length the same the poem will be fab! lol keep it up tho Neil =)

Jenn

Aye i lyk the bit abt her being the moon that was gwd...love dia mwaz xoxo

Hey Neil, I loved it. It is hard for us guys to show emotion like that...awesome job.

Joe

Ohhh very nice neil!!! how emotional!! wow excellent! just great!!! who's it about?

I hate you so bad i thought you said you liked me but that was a lie.

Great peom
Well done :)

Fallen*-

AM I YOUR TRUE LOVE NOW

Really good poem. keep it up.
dee

Dude, that was like cool, a bit short but had feeling, I liked how you compared the girl to the moon, that line and the following were friggin' genius. Good job

Brought tear to my eyes its so truthful so real so wow