This is a delightful poem which reads like a novel

Wow, that was really great. I loved the way you went into details. this made it
easy for me to imagine that day you were talking about. the scenes, the sounds(from the sound of the clock to the echo of the shutting doors) and your thoughts and feelings were all perfectly described. I especially loved the forth, fifth, sixth and the seventh
stanzas of the first part. uh... and one thing about that part you said"it just made me to scream so God himself could hear me". well, in my opinion, you don't need to scream. God is within you. you don't even need to whisper cuz when a thought passes your mind without you saying it aloud, he will hear it anyway.
well, I talked too much. but lemme describe this poem in one word. no, no, in two words: a lively poem and fabulous.

much love,
marjan

Awww what happens? Yes I am hooked! P.s I've rated each part.