I love this poem, it seems to have a lot of meaning in it, you are a very talented writer and i cant wait to read more of your stuff, if you ever need to talk feel free to email me, please comment on some of my poems it will be greatly appreciated.
love cass xoxo

I like the rhyme and the structure...but the topic for me is hard to relate too...still a good poem...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

This was really good. I felt like that yesterday. I lost my best frend, So i turned to the knife.............Keep smiling though =]
lots of luv
natalie x-x-x

Beautful - The rhymes were really great, enjoyable, if slightly sad, poem!

Peace. [Sole]

Emotion in every word...its a great poem. definitely 5/5...keep up the good work, and dont EVER stop writing

But these memories of you wont go away they still exist

Maybe shorten this to, "But memories of you still exist." It's up to you. And I hink you mean, through and not threw.

Otherwise, an enjoyable sad poem.

Very very good its kinda what im going through right now i can relate to alot of your poems. verygood
Ashlick (ashley)

Great flow and vocab usage. very effectivly written

5/5

This is deep, with such a meaning to it. heartfelt, filled with passion. sad. i could feel the sadness within myself. i loved it.

Kat

This is very deep & I can somewhat relate to it.. about the missing the guy & stuff. But I liked it..it flowed well. Great job! 5/5*

Not bad, but some gramatical and spelling errors..
" threw" should be "through"

also, you should capitalize your "I's" and add a few commas.

other than all that, great poem!

Very sad. I pray to god this isn't true. You could have made it a little longer, Gone in deeper. But it was good how it was.

`taleee xx

You are a very talented person.. this is just so sad.. please keep up the amazing work!
jessy

Another awesome poem
5/5
love
amy