Excellent poem!!!!!!!!!!!! Your words allow the reader an insight into the pain and frustration of such a tragic loss.

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I like this poem, the ending explained it all, very good. and coming to ur comment on my poem now.. I would tell my parents.. but I just dont think its the right time.. and it would just lead to more stress for them.. and i dont want that.. and shame on my mothers family since the second time it was her brother who did it.. so yeah.. well thanks again for the comment, and great poem hun. 5/5

I like this poem alot..I know a few ppl who lost someone to a drunk driver...PPl like that shouldnt even be allowed a chance out of punishment..Well ne way Great poem hun...Joc