*TEARS*

Wow this really was sad and beautifully honest

Sondos

Exellent. the flow was perfect, the images were clear, and you still had such a good moral. one of your best!!!

Ruby

Speak out for those who are silenced....

[lostlaureate- come find me]

Cruel and haunting, not you of course but the words and the subject. I'd just suggest fixing the one or two spelling errors. Well taht and those people stop killing thos epoor dogs but people don't listen, now do they.

Omg this is such a sad poem; i'm a dag lover this almost made me cry :( but it's well written though i loved the meaning of it :) keep writing :)

~StefQ

This one was a shrt excellent poem:)
it really punched me in my heart at the end.'~'

Wow...it's so weird how it's human nature for us to care so much for pets/animals. I love this poem...it really helps people understand what goes on behind closed doors and labs.

"Each animal is forgotten
Nothing but numbers on pages
And ten more enter the lab
To fill the empty cages."

...great way to end the poem I thought. It kinda makes it seem like the poem will repeat itself with a part 2 or something.

So sad, but very well-written! 5/5

Thanks for your comment on my poem!

That was a sad piece on animal testing, I had to write a paper about that so I'm all for your view. So good points for message, the rhyming was good and everything

I'm an animal lover and this really showed what happens with animal testing, it went together beautifully and i loved it.

Mmm, it was okay. x