Okay that was scary
I loved the knife imagery
Scary
And amazing
AND SCARY

Very nice. the last two lines were haunting. this poem had great imagry! very well written!!

Ruby

Wow thats really sad great but sad keep up the great work 5.5

I have no idea why this poem doesn't have a higher rating! It painted reality so well, and it was so deep! I've never read anything like it! I loved it

Poor man, he feels like just a secret to me. You know, how we all keep secrets nobody wants to know.

Wow thats amazing. great imagery. i love the last line. its great. nice job!

Imaginative and scary, well done xxxxx

Amazing. this is the bets so far. very very very good. and so powerful.
-Suzie J

I admit the imagery was great but didn't like some of the words...hmm. But still this had been such an excellent write. The first stanza was my fave. Just how it was about the silence and the knife. Great job. Cool with just the entire thing especially imagery and the verbs. Nice job and it was amazing.
~Faith-less

Wow intensive, but amazing. i like you poetry im rading quit a bit of it ur a true poet hun xxxx 5/5