Your Voice

by Eduardo Serrano   Mar 20, 2006


Your voice is gentle
Like the soft morning breeze
When I'm confused
It can help me ease

I could stay on the phone
Just to hear your sweet soft voice
When I hear you speak
My heart pounds wildly
Then I lye on the ground
Because my knees get weak

Each night, I look into the sky
Wondering if your doing the same
But no matter what,
I'm still thinking of you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bubblez

    I think that this poem shows real emotion and shows how much you care about someone you know how to write down your emotions keep that is a very good quality

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    I really love this poem. It has a nice flow, nice use of words. It's a fantastic love poem!

    I especially love the first and third stanza. The second has a weird flow, when you say "then I lye on the ground... knees get weak"

    But overall it's a wonderful poem! Well done! Keep writing and keep improving.

    And welcome to our club Silhouette. Check out our dicussion board =)

    Lotsaaaaaaa love
    -xxx-

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