Wow, what a way to say 'I Love You'. That was just great. I loved the way you wrote it. You got some talent girl. Keep it up.

Love
Michelle

What a wonderful poem....sweet and happy....it flows well and has a great "feel" to it.

I'm feeling kind of embarresed that you love my poems. Cause yours are so much better~! haha

I loved it. It's such a sweet poem. So lovely. Beautiful written. Nice use of words.

Simply took my breath away!

Well done sweety!
Loved every part of it
Keep it up hun

Lotsaaaaaaa love
-xxx-

Wonderful flow, beautiful words and a lovely cheery feel. Enjoyed the read :)

Good Flow.. With Soo Much Emotion And Love.. Well Done Another Great Write

Wonderful dedication Mary, ardent with love, fevor, and adoration, great penn!!!

Short/Simple and So Sweet..loved it truely.

all the best and take care
5/5

I liked the title Mary. really makes someone go inside and read. i like the playway emotions that you've built thru the poem, making it sound casual, yet subtly bringing out the beauty of falling in love.

love and luck
shobhana

Well i love such accidents. hopefully esperience one soon. lool .

all the best,
just wishes

Ah, the essence of love is beautifully portrayed in this wonderful poem. an exquisite piece.

We accidentally fall in love all the time...you described it very well. I must admit I've experienced this. It may not be what we were expecting but it's certainly is a wonder surprise. I love this piece...something I think MANY can relate to...NICELY DONE!!! :)

I know I've read this before...not sure why I didn't comment...

Cute, short & sweet. This piece was cute and fun! i enjoyed reading it ... 5/5, good job :D