Oh wow!!! I missed reading your poems and apparently for a good reason. I'd forgotten how wonderfully beautiful they could be but I am now reminded as my mind has now exploded from the love and sincerity that I feel in this poem. Your words are mystifyingly amazing!

love always,
Mary

Wonderful poem, filled with love and appreciation... Great stuff :)

Woah! 5/5!!!

Great Poem.. Soo Much To Read.. But Once You're Reading It Seems Like Nothing.. Well Done It's A Really Good write.

OMG Bill ,
I think I really am about to cry ...
and it's not from this intense feeling of loneliness I feel ...
This piece is so incredibly touching .It moves me to tears .

You give your all in every single poem you write but in this one I feel your heart .

Take care , my friend
Please tell everyone I miss them and send my love XXXXXXXXXX

This is so touching and beautiful. words coming from the very depths of your heart and words that will be remembered and cherished forever by this wonderful person this is a dedication to.

good luck, peace and happiness always
shobhana

Daamnn pretty fcuking heavyy .. i hope i can write this well eventually .. and thnx for the comment i made the edits you advised, thnx again

oh and if you want to hear something funny:
i wrote that other poem about a year ago and when i finally moved on he broke up with his g.f. and came crawling back to me . and ofcourse after i had moved on from the other b.f. he had gotten a new g.f. how ironicc ? we're still good friends though . but i don't think we'll ever syncronize our availability

oh and i put another poem up . idk how good it is i wrote it yesterday and edited it today

much love and grattitude,
~ *Kate

Again gr8...ur whole poem was amazing but i adore the last stanza....

awesome work sir!

Bharti

I was going to say exacly what ADEL said :P 5/5

Have no words except Amazing. You have a very lucky lady in your life.
Loretta

Very nice and beautiful