Comments : Car ride

  • 14 years ago

    by Crystal

    Thats good..... could be a little more intense but other then that you done a good job sweetie.....


  • 14 years ago

    by ButterflyKisses_xo

    Ahh its really really ggoood !!! 5/5 I loved it!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Avellana

    Slowly the lights start to move and sway''

    This was immense. Well creepy, and that line is V. cool. Whole poem rules.

    Lv A, x