Comments : Commandments of a Perfect Man (Excess Illusions)

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Compton

    Hey! Well, not your best Noni, but it was still excellent. Good job! You should read mine, I wrote a new one.

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    Oh how true this really is. looks are deff
    not everything. amazing job love the massage 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    A nice fantacy poem with much truth in the last line

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Xkitty24X~

    Its a really good poem from a really great writer :)
    5/5