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I love the compleat flow of your poem but this part spech struck a personal note with me
"You think that you can't play
And people don't want to hear
But I heard you play today
And your unfaltering notes were music to my ears" i could relate to this very well
good job

Wow this is so sweet i really like it that is the nicest thing to say and youve put it so eloquently well done ALLY

This poem is a work of art
And like all your other poems it flows realy well and makes the poem a great read, great keep up the good work!

Ah, origionality, bonus points. The rhyming was all good I liked the last stanza, it held the most meaning to me. I noticed only one mistake, fourth stanza, third line, sixth word should be sever, severe indicates harshness, whereas I believe you mean sever as in cut away

Wow...I love this poem! It's extremely well-written and I love the message too. I completely understand how you feel cause music is my thing. It's sorta hard to tell if the entire poem is a metaphor or if it's really about music....I love it though.

"Music that transformed my mind
As I drifted to another place
And the troubles that I left behind
As I looked into your face"

....you did a great job with this stanza. 5/5

Thanks for your comments too!

I went to this poem next, because I saw the word Music. I'm a passionate musician, and I sometimes feel shy playing in front of people. I also feel like I'm not good at times. This was a good poem, definitely spoke to me.

Beautiful, inspiring, it was perfect in my eyes
keep writing such awesome poems

Hey I liked it :)

This is such and original piece and it has such beautiful wording used! You had me in a beautiful trance all the way to the last paragraph when you slowly took me with your words back out of my trance! It was awesome and you have such a way with words!